Plot Feedback

After deciding what our final story would be and exactly how the film will represent social realism, i shared the idea with a few people to see what they thought..

Imogen Joyce (Student at the college)-
'I think it will work really well because it is unpredictable and will really get the audience involved, they will also be able to relate to the story themselves'

Ami Hewitt (Media Student)-
'I really like the idea of using the same scenes for the young and older characters, the dissolve shot from one character to another sounds like it will be really effective, can't wait to see it!'

Both these students were selected because they represent the target audience as they are young and female, so their feedback was helpful in creating a good film.